Randomindividual

No i get what you mean. But if you write out the full chapter first to your best effort without using ai, then your forced to improve. Then, once the chapter is finished, you can then plug it into the Ai and either ask it for a reveiw ( hopefully you take the advice) and then ask it to improve grammar. After that, check it hasn't altered your work and then publish. Don't get me wrong, I hate ai slop, especially if it's used to generate entire chapters. Ai is the best way to review work quickly and get feedback, and this should be done every single chapter until you can survive on your own talent.

Ofcourse, the dragon core can't run out of energy. It's still usable to teleport between spaces like cities and other uses .It's quite integral to the story, at least later on. As for the Man in the Wall, hes absolutely awake .He doesn't show himself though, because using his power kills Cypher faster. Like magic cancer, sort of.

No, The dragon core was just a powerful source of energy. It woke 'The man in the Wall' up from deep sleep. He was inside Cypher, and he has the ability to travel between worlds. The dragon core initially reacted because it's a fragment of the betrayer. The betrayer was originally from the Well, that is before it was reduced to its current state. The man in the wall merely accidentally sent Cypher and Elie through a rift as he was being woken up, because his power locked onto the betrayers home dimension. It's a bit convoluted, and i will explain this as the story goes on. Your a consistent reader thou, so you get info early 😉

Yea, sorry bout that. I try to post every week day. On the other hand, I have to write with a raging head ache, so if i dont get any coffee to focus, I'm incapable of writing clearly.

It's because he lost his will in the process. Notice when Corydon tied him up on strings, he didn't break down, However, he hates not being in control of his own actions. To him, he feels like a caged bird.

You can think of soul Caliber as inner strength to impose your will. It is internal power made manifest. Concepts, like change, obsurdity and freedom are all drawing power from a fundamental force of existence. In other words it represents external power made manifest. Instead of steady stable progression, Concept is fast and extremely unstable. It relies on certain Sacrifices being made in sequence in order to not kill you by wielding it. Someone like Hastur, the titan, is completely and utterly corrupted by his external concept and is barely more than an animal. Corydon, still has some semblance of a will, because he hasn't fully lost himself due to wanting to see his family. Cypher on the other hand, hasn't made these sacrifices yet, and as such, his internal power and external concept create a paradox of two opposing energies battling with eachother, leading to death eventually. Either you have soul power or you rely on your concept, both cannot co - exist. As for choosing who gets this concept, it's exceedingly rare and is forced into someone when they delve to deep into one idea. Thankyou for reading by the way.

It's not that big of a deal as long as you write it out first and then read it. It's pretty simple to go through and remove words like 'unseen'. You can also change the metaphors and similes it uses whole fixing the Repetitive chapter endings ai uses alot.

Dylan Hawkwood? More like ....Dylan HAWK TUAH!!!😭😭😭

Meh, it's not awful. However, the characters make it immediately obvious that they don't act like they should. For example, Levi acts like a low level Chinese goon, which is really annoying to read. I think this is a translation, so unfortunately, it's probably not going to get any better as time goes on and I shudder to think of what might happen to the female characters after they see the MCs perfect, angelic face.

Amazing! It's really good and unique in all honesty. Possibly the most interesting Cyberpunk fiction out there. Why? It's not necessarily the cyberpunk world that ropes you in, but the MC himself that is the interesting thing. He's insane, ruthless and perfect. The characters and world all feel organic, and each individual personality of the MC is perfectly executed and unique with their own skills without taking away from the story. The only reason I'm not giving five stars is this author has recently been dropping his novels around 40 chapters in. Not hating on that or anything, its quite difficult to find a good peice to write and sometimes it just doesn't work out.