Hurky_Toast

Haha, I was thinking just of that actually. But I've realized my incompetence in writing such tragic scenes, so that may be a problem. But thanks for the recommendation, brother.

trissy's a gansta, but other than that the story isn't that bad at all, very interesting so far

hell yea

you have a double comma in this paragraph btw

church of light seems like a interesting concept man looking forward to this religion wondering if there's going to be a church of darkness or smthing

this is quite good, the writing is really nice. Your update schedule is also amazing looking forward to the rest of the novel and hope for the best for this novel

oh this is nice, ngl, I'll be consistently looking at what you have next, man

nice calm chapter, but I'd recommened removing the quotation marks around the parenthesis, makes it weird to read overall, but this sounds like a good start man

this was nice; it adds a sense of mystery and shows us a glimpse of the power system in this world.

Emily is going to be my role model i will always make sure to carry a kitchen knife in my pocket.