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At the age of 9 or 10, when the Millicas character appears in canon, he rivals Vali in demonic powers. He has better control over his power of destruction than Rias, and his speed allows him to go toe-to-toe with Kiba, even when Kiba's speed is boosted by his Knight chess piece. This is all established in canon and is easy to verify. Now, at 17 years old, he has been training with Grayfia for most of his life, according to the author. so you do the math yourself. he is one of the few devils with the potential to reach the top of that world without relying on external means, such as Sacred Gears or other forms of help like Ajuka and his father and this is all information taken from light novel canon not something i just came up with , i dont know the exakt chapter or page is was if ur intrested look it up urself ^^

This isn't me trying to portray him in a certain way; my information comes from canon. Of course, he wouldn't have been all-powerful at age 9 anyone with more experience could have easily defeated him he is 9 after all. However, he's 17 now, and if he was that powerful at age 9 and continued training with Grayfia until he turned 17, I don't see how he wouldn't be at least in the ultimate class now. This leads me to believe it's either a nerf, or that the characters around him have been dumbed down hard

fk this tanaka guy , i want to see kaguya reading it instead lol

The story had potential, but it is also quite annoying. The main character, Milicas, is 17 years old. In "High School DxD," Milicas at ages 9-10 possesses enough demonic power to rival Vali at the start of canon, so he clearly has a lot of raw strength. At that young age, he can keep up with Rias's knight, Yuuto Kiba, in terms of speed, boosted by a demonic chess piece that enhances his abilities. Additionally, at ages 9-10, he exhibits better control over his power of destruction than Rias does at ages 18-19. Milicas is recognized as having the most potential of all devils to rise to the top in "High School DxD," excluding Ajuka and his father. Everyone knows this, which is why he is heavily guarded and trained. However, in this fanfic, he is aged up to 17 and has been trained by Grayfia for a long time. Despite this, the people around him act as if he would have trouble against a minor grunt like Diodora, who never trains. The author even states that Milicas's grandfather doesn't believe he would win in a fight against Diodora. Rias and the others treat Milicas like he is delicate, even though he is significantly stronger than they are. This raises a frustrating question: Did the author portray all the characters as foolish and incompetent, or has he simply nerfed the main character? Either scenario is disappointing and annoying, which is why I’m giving it a 2-star rating.

Hey, what's up with the characters in your story? They're really odd. The only reason Rias is the "Heir" is that Millicas wasn't old enough; otherwise, Rias's dad would have made him the heir without a second thought. At the age of 8, Millicas was probably stronger than most heirs in Rias's generation. He had enough demonic power to match Vali when he shows up in the canon, and he can control his power of destruction much better than Rias. Plus, his speed at age 8 was enough to keep up with the boosted knight Yuuto. Your main character is 17 and even weaker than canon Millicas at age 8. Millicas himself is likely one of the future Satans, with more potential than all devils born, if you exclude Ajuka and his father. So, again, what's up with the characters around your MC? Why wouldn't his grandfather believe he could win against these weaker beings? Or are you intentionally making every character around the MC less intelligent?

The story has potential, but the real author has mishandled the fighting skills and magic system of the DxD universe, resulting in something quite disappointing. In the original DxD series, devils possess imagination magic, but in this fanfiction, that seems to be nonexistent. For instance, the main character has to go to Rias to obtain a magic scroll for "ultimate lightning" in order to use the same magic as Akeno. i almost laughed out loud when i read it. In this fanfic, people don't need skills to be considered good. It doesn't matter if you've mastered karate for a thousand years, if someone has 40 more points in strength, they're considered stronger and better..again, quite ridiculous. It's a story where you need to switch off your brain to enjoy it. Furthermore, the "R-18" tag is simply clickbait, which is common in many Chinese stories. There are hardly any actual sex scenes, just vague references that use strange euphemisms like "the banana got peeled and mashed." It feels more like pure clickbait and is extremely badly done...but what can you expect from chinese fanfic? The only aspect they excel at is the slice-of-life moments in the story. Yes, they include elements like picking up characters from other worlds, but even that is badly done. On the bright side, the translator does a good job, so that's definitely a plus.

It may have improved after I stopped reading and completed the review, but I doubt it. The reality is that it’s one of the few “Skyrim” fanfics out there, and that's likely the only reason it remains popular.

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again, somone who just copy paste it but with their own hands and just change minor things to his own feelings and taste .. it really dont seems that hard espeachally when he already have experiance in that field of work

nah, he translated it ^^