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Kakashi killed 2 people here 1 physically and the Other emotionally .
The quality of this chapter dropped from 90 to 10 literally .
Tobirama if he saw this ...
Sasuke be like ...
Bro is death-keeper !
Wtf you talking about bro we're not on the same page.
Synopsis -> Mc is born as a farmer finds out he's a transmigrator at like in his 20s , he gets a system that increases his realm in cultivation and secondary arts (alchemy,formation,talismen and more) based on clan members and any guests that joined his clan . He helps his sons and wife practice in martial arts at start slowly find a path to cultivate , The system helps alot in talent qualifications and bloodline for the entire family. He slowly devolps his clan through secondary arts to earn money and support his clan overall it's pretty good . Mo Bei is the main villan btw ! Pros -> 1) Mc works hard at start 2) Has a good system 3) Enjoyable read 4) Good Clan development 5) Mc uses intelligence here and even villans not all of them stupid. Cons -> 1) Translation becomes terrible at 200 + chapters like even the characters are called under multiple different names even the realms. 2) After he reaches immortal world it gets boring for quite a while 3) Mc has a smooth journey in cultivation never suffered a setback after he became an Foundation establishment . 4) Mc progressing way too fast in cultivation is leaving little interactions with the characters and clan development in general other than basic mentioning of pavillions not much in-depth interactions between clan memebers.
But atleast it was good i agree the author fked up after 200 only the sword arc after that was ok . But if the author did it properly it would have been amazing .