Francois_Bartolo

Thank you for your detailed feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. It's true that automatic translation can sometimes give a different impression from the original, but I'm happy you could still appreciate the quality of the plot. Regarding the characters, I totally understand your point. The first chapters are indeed more focused on setting up the universe and the storyline, but I promise that the characters, including Kaeden, will be further developed as the story progresses. I hope you enjoy what's coming next and feel more connected to them as the story unfolds. Thanks again for your feedback, it really motivates me to keep going!

As for your observation about the inspiration, you’re absolutely right—it is inspired by Dune, just as many other literary works, comics, and films draw from existing masterpieces. My work is also influenced by classics like Foundation by Isaac Asimov, Star Wars, and even Blade Runner. Inspiration is a key part of the creative process, and I’m proud to be part of that tradition.

Thank you for your feedback. I must admit, I was a bit surprised by your results, so I decided to run my own tests using the same platforms. Here’s what I found: Grammarly: 48% ZeroGPT: 27.48% Quillbot: 79% The discrepancies might be due to the fact that my native language is French, and I sometimes use AI translation tools to render my text in English. The original version of this work is actually available in French on my page. I also tested the French version using the same platforms, and here are the results: ZeroGPT: 53% Grammarly: 0% Quillbot: 0% As you can see, the results differ significantly depending on the language. It’s a reminder that AI detection tools are not flawless and that a literary work is more than just a collection of scores. Not everyone is a native English speaker, so I apologize for any confusion. But it's important to recognize the limitations of these tools when evaluating creative work.