JusJules

Good story! Coincidentally I have a character named Kaelin in my story too lol. Keep writing and developing your story, its in a good start.

The story is exciting and there so much to look forward to, on the story. I particularly like the names of the characters. Thought, on the earlier chapter, it would be a great addition if you could somehow describe each important characters appearance like you did with Miss Megan.

The story is predominantly told from the MC's point of view. While the narrative can be a bit lazy at times and the world-building progresses slowly for the number of chapters, the plot remains interesting and fresh. The relationship development is particularly intriguing and well-executed.

I'm giving myself my first rating just to get some attention. If you read my novel, please feel free to share your insights to help me improve my writing or encourage me to do more. <3