Azakinu

Reading this story, it's obvious that the only thing the author had in mind when writing it was gore. No substance, only violence. Lacks any real creative writing, and the target audience for this would be edgy 13 year olds. The story is boring and messy, and the grammar is decent. Background had potential but screwed up by funky writing. Characters all suck, and MC is basically a serial killers wet dream and has no real value/ characterization besides being an edgy person who likes to do messed up stuff. The writing of morals in general in this story is so incredibly inconsistent and overall this just sucks. If you want a story with substance, dont bother with this.

thats one long title lol

I can't read more of this. The grammar is god-awful, and it does NOT get fixed later on. Decent premise, terrible translation. I can feel my braincells die reading this.

So far, I've read up to the leaving chapter (alround chapter 80) , and im loving it. It's a really nice, cozy novel about crafting. I like the characters, and the worldbuilding seems to have a lot of potential. The crafting aspects are nice and get explained thoroughly. I also quite like how this world is set up and how the story is going so far, and how deep this novel goes into topics about crafting. Story wise so far, i think there is no reason to complain, and im looking forward to finishing the novel. Now, onto the only real negative i found so far. The only issue i have with this novel is the grammar in certain places. For example, using "How I said" in places where it should've been "Like i said." These are minor things, but it happens quite frequently. The story is good enough to be able to look past that for me, but i still figured i should mention it. Besides this example, there are other grammatical errors that come from translating the novel that dont really sound right in english. There are also spelling mistakes here and there that often dont get corrected, but this doesnt happen a lot. But these are things that i think personally you should try to look past and still be able to enjoy the novel. I think these mistakes are all pretty normal, and this is still pretty well written, especially when compared to some other novels written by a non native english speaker. Overall, I would recommend reading this novel if you like stories that delve deeper into the crafting aspect rather than the combat aspect of such worlds. Please give it a shot, and try to look past any grammatical mistakes.

If he can make the best items,weapons and gear i highly doubt combat skills matter that much. Even with stage 5 combat skills he'll be pretty OP with simply his gear alone

nice

Achievement unlocked : Genocide

It's a pretty good novel so far, with the few chapters I've read up until now. The writing can be a tad akward at times (the way the system/ his story of reincarnation is introduced feels a bit off and akward to me), but besides that, it's pretty good so far. The story is rather enjoyable, and the setting is quite nice. It has potential, and i hope it gets even better as it goes on. There are still too few chapters to make a definite review, so i might update my review once the chapters reach the 200s. So far, it's pretty average but enjoyable.

You cant write off bad writing that way. Bad grammar is bad grammar. Bad grammar isn't the result of being reincarnated, its simply a mistake of the writer.

I mean, knowledge wise, you would be right, but he still needs resources and strength. Since he said that in his past life, his combat prowess was pretty much negligible. i think that factors into it as well. Even if he was unmatched when it came to alchemy, he was weak as hell as a cultivator. He just doesn't want to repeat old mistakes.