TheGuyOfObscurity

This story greatly describes the feelings, conflict, and appearance, also this book mixes with some anime elements and spells/skills. However, I saw there is something that confused me, sometimes the author uses "she/her" for Envi(system) but sometimes the author uses "he/him" for the system.

Pov while Nao is fighting trolls :

It’s called Zalgo text, it change your font to eerie style.

It's a pity that there are not too many people reading this book, however I like it. Ugh... so what I want to say is... MORE CHAPTER MORE CHAPTER MORE CHAPTER MORE CHAPTER MORE CHAPTER MORE CHAPTER.

I agree so freaking much [img=Smitten]

I pronounce it "fog" not "fag" before.[img=Smug]

Alright, it's a good novel that I can suggest to others. The plot is good and interesting, and the characters are well-shaped. As for writing, it's all good, described well, with good grammar that is easy to understand, while reading the words my brain imagines the scene instantly. That's all, nothing says now, so just keep it up! I'll support your novel.

Imma be Lin Fan’s dog so that he can teach me how to cultivate [img=Smug] Lin Fan’s character is well shaped, perfectly reflect how a weak person will do after got a strong power and greedy for many, authority and beauty. However, Lin Fan still gives some benefit to the people who submit to him. The obedient one get the reward, the disobedient one get… to the heaven. Keep it up, I’ll support you.

I prefer to read in paragraph form, it's quite hard to understand. However, the story is still great, well-explained and organized. So yeah, keep it up! you can do it!

Author here, I want to revise the first ten chapters. It is not recommended to read this book before I have finished revising it. Pov : me when I compared my start with the start of other book….