silver_tooth2

its good

the beginning is really good it made me read the entire novel after reading it i wish there were more chapters for this novel the story is really intriguing the way magic is introduced and other such things I hope you complete this novel to the end

i think i miss wrote damn the story is really good you seem like a pro

damn it really you OLI really feel like you are not a beginner

well the story might have just started but it good