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didnt the Protagonist Chaos god Made sure the cant say the Chaos gods Name outside there regional Chat. and i is the warhammer universe give it some time shit gonna Hit the Fan at somepoint
irecommend you read this it is so worth it. saw YouTube Video by the Channel Audio fanfiction and listened to the First to 38 chapters(was all there is so far) and been hooked since then, while i was dissapointed that it was only 38 chapters Long that changed really fast . we now have almost 100. the Story is a decent time Investment and even someone with minimal knowledge of 40K can enjoy it.
da hell ?? why does this chapter existierten nothin but the Letter S??
tldr it is maybe A.I slop okayy so Story ist predictable, and potencialy written with A.I. seeing as there are many sentences that are repeating itself in the Same sentence. rias's Brother For one promised the Same reward 3 Times and the Talk about stopping the marrige Happens twice so far. all in all i read 50+ chapters and can say with confidance it can be subtracted by 3.
annd it has been almost 3 months so far. i can Unserstand waiting For new stuff to be written but in the patreon there is Up to chapter 24 Last i checked. so a chapter ever month and a half should have been possible.
why is this called ZZZ . . .IT has nothing to do with the game. and is written confusingly.
i am but a simple man i See belle Cover Pic, i click First 5 chapter are not some tech-based slob aka written or Translation by A.I. or Google translate without rewriting certain Things that makes only Sense in Chinese. i give 3 Stars Upload is daily (as of writing this comment and 20 chapter available) IT IS a 5star Story For now.
bruh i have been doing this For a Week far XD. nothing new
Hope Thema zzz Part Starts at Thema next chapter cause this one felt Like a politician use Thema art of speaking with many words to das nothing a all.
at first I thought this can't go well since I know all three of the of sources of this fan fiction and the few reviews here seemed all to positiv. so I bit the bullet had a check and I had a blast for around 1-2 hours(19 chapters is not long). Also Belle is best girl so that became easier. that and I would act in a similar manner not as directe or in your face(pun intended read the fic if you wanna get it) if I was in her shoes. decent read to read away the afternoon.