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although the synopsis is good but it just feels like it's made using Ai I mean every sentence he gotta talk there's a too much descriptive words like it just ruins the immersive feeling I mean he keeps repeating he's cold,emotionless with every time I read Author if this is made by Ai then please put in in the synopsis so other readers won't regret it and it can ruin someone's time

bro it turned into a Chinese power level then,so no for me i guess

and also some other characters have Chinese names with one mountain being called liangjie mountain which is unnnecessaryand should be translated and the mc is too stupid for his sake, he called danzo a dog when he could've just be silent so no trouble comes to him? and there's a part where his wooden dragon was portrayed as a god when it was only even at elite jonins strength? overall: good but poorly translated fic

this is one of the best Naruto fanfiction I've ever read,please continue this!

+1 from me

+1 from me

The novel is good with few mistakes,but my only problem is the name,can't you just change the name to a Japanese one? i mean a Chinese name in a Japanese one is uncomfortable if it were a Chinese novel it would be good but in a Japanese such as Naruto?

i think you're good at this than iam,you can create a novel using this concept I guess?

Author here! I've dropped the novel so if anyone likes my novels “concept” they can make their own novel and inform me so I can watch your novel!

Too Good!!!!! I'd say it's a novel worth to read...