NekoNoPara

NOOO! THE TITLE! END YOU'RE LIFE SHIT AUTOR

continuation = (Hoping the next chapter isn’t titled Farewell Naboru,” like this one was called “Farewell Lysandros...”) [sorry , i just see that the chapter isn't goodbye but farewell , that due to my translator]

I’m not going to beat around the bush—the chapter is definitely one of the best you’ve written, even though it’s short. Your choice to make it shorter was really smart, and I love what you’ve created. Lysandros is such a detestable character, yet you managed to make me feel compassion and sadness for him during his death, and I’m not someone who easily feels pity—so, bravo! You’re a great storyteller! Continuing with the theme of Lysandros' death and his final words, the fact that his last sentence was an order for Ume, and that the order is directly tied to the idea that people feel cold when they die, is just incredibly well thought out. I loved it. You really captured "Lysandros" in that request. Also, the contrast between him feeling cold and the palace burning is just perfect—I love it! I also adore how Lysandros' tone shifted from delivering an apology in his last words, then reverting to his true self, and finally breaking down and revealing his terror. Anyway, I won’t write much more or else my comment will be longer than your chapter, haha. I’m so excited! (Hoping the next chapter isn’t titled “Goodbye Naboru,” like this one was called “Goodbye Lysandros...”)

the chapter was just too cool! like i said earlier, logical, but really cool i can't wait for you to continue! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE UME BEAT LYSANDROS!!!

although the fact that ume has powers was logical because in this world, having powers is the norm, I find that it was really well brought, especially his reikaku (right here! I love it)! I can't wait to read the rest

The chapter is interesting, I think there are things that readers including me cannot yet understand and I really like that.... I can't wait to understand the usefulness of this chapter

Well , I give you a very good rating because I think that there is great potential in your webnovel and that it hides a lot of things in my opinion... I should not be able to give such a good rating because there are not enough chapters but truly, if you continue like this I think I can say without fear that you will be able to keep this perfect note, we will see at the end of the 1st arc

Blud that pretty sad for you.... But I don't frikin' care

I think we all figured out that he's now called "Julius Aurorion, King of the Dawn" lil' bluddy

Blud I frickin' don't understand your "author thoughts" but that doesn't matter, I guess you had a good excuse?