LovelyFemTai

WARNING, POSSIBLE SPOIL = For the moment it's quite nice. I really like the the specificities of the mountain range (the Divina Sozo) the first region (alamyst) and its capital (Auratria) is quite interesting. The fact that you talk about the legend of the region and the city makes immersion easy. But I really started to like it for real in chapter 7 because you described a lot of things whith an encyclopedia ( forgot the name) and a "bible" that the protagonist reads which reinforces RolePlay. I hope that you will manage to keep an identical Roleplay throughout your work because perhaps that is what (in addition to your story) will be able to make your webnovel popular, I hope so for you. (Ps: thank you for sending me this webnovel [if you see this comment])

I think the Same, it's nice to think of this kind of bonus, it reinforces the immersion without breaking the logic of the writing [img=recommend]

Oh my god, the rich guy looks angry... Poor Naboru who just wants to continue on his way quietly X=X