really good but the update are not consistent and when is the next chapter author? but you did a great job so keep it up author !!

thanks for the chapter author but when is the next update ?

really good but the update are really slow

Ayo!? isn't he a boy?

is limy a boy or a girl because it's a girl name but is says he

really good but since it's in development I can't say much but keep it up author !

can we say visage in English 'cause i know that's french but i didn't know we could say that in English

oh mon dieu pierre et Guillaume ?! c'est des nom tellement français

good Luck learning the language of baguette et croissant

welp maybe it adds charm

please tell me there's no harem

really good beginning and I really like the mc hope that there would be more chapter's

i don't understand who is hiro?

so relatable

really good start just maybe when a character speak to themselves or to someone it will be good if there could be a mark or something to demonstrate that there are speaking

Really 👍 should definitely try at least But not having coins i can't read further 🥲

when you say "hearing magic" you mean healing magic right? appert from that really good beginnings and i hope there wil' be more chapters 👍

really interesting and the killers side of ren is really a plus but mary is really a trash

I like the fact that they did not react