Lord_Freezer

Started out as a promising story, but quickly turned into a chore to read. Becomes extremely repetitive regarding Vegito. I don't need to hear about his unique perspective 16 times in every fucking chapter. I thought you'd eventually stop but you didn't and worse you decided to make it a freakshow by wishing him a wife into existence. Its just twisted. Also, denying him a normal relationship by having bulma and chi chi gift him a woman you've just placed further emphasis on the fact that he's never going to grow out of being a fusion and become a normal functioning person. Now there's someone else with a 'unique perspective' that we're going to have to hear about every single time they have a conversation with someone. TLDR Interesting idea, mind numbingly boring mc. Freakshow romance.

Bulma and chici is a really fucked up decision. Rationalise it whatever way you want, its still creepy af. Its like a mail order bride taken to another level and honestly would just make vegito seem pathetic. If you go that route like it seems you are then I'll be swiftly dropping this story.

Pretty obvious this is going the waifu pokemon route so I'm out. Disappointing.

I vote for Camie solo route. Waifu pokemon ruins stories. You lose the depth of the relationship and character interactions suffer. Also just doesn't make sense in a Japanese society regardless of them being 200 years ahead.

Incredibly dull story, lacking much depth to it with a detestable main character. A fake smiling manipulative scumbag. Very slow pacing which doesn't make any sense considering there's not much world building to speak of.

This is really well written and there's a depth to the world that isn't present in many other stories. Unfortunately this depth isn't seen in the main character. The main character has no friends or romantic prospects, every interaction with another human being is entirely fake and manipulative. He's deeply unlikeable and the reason given for the lack of emotional attachments is incredibly shallow. Overall the story had amazing potential, unfortunately ruined by the main characters emotionless approach to everything.

Gonna be about 400 chapters before supes finally grows up and stops being a blubbering baby. Who tf wants to read a whole story where the mc is a 5 year old.

Genuinely disgusted that that's his goal in life. It's already annoying when the reincarnator plagiarises books for easy money to get started. This though is just so much worse. You're given ridiculous powers and you piss it away so that you can sit back and do nothing. What a waste of my time reading this.

Not yuri.....................................................................................................................................................

Villain fics are trash. Dropped................................................................................................................................................................