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PLEASE. I NEED TO READ THE REST. I know that this was probably written years ago, but its never too late!! I actually didn't check when it was written, but I haven't read and books on this platform that aren't at least 1 year old. I think your character design was really good. The personalities were really clear and the logic just made sense. The world background was really good too. I feel it might need a bit more description in the places where you're introducing new places, but other than that, it's really good! I did spot a few spelling and punctuation mistakes though. (Wow! I actually spelled punctuation right! lol) I really do want you to continue the story though!!! Great writing!

NOOOOOOOOOOOO. Please finish the book!! I know the past chapters were probably written like years ago, but its never too late! PLEASE. I don't want to imagine the end on my own... :( I have done that with WAY too many books. Great book! The development of the story is really good! I think that it could have used a bit more description in some places though. Definitely not in the part were you were describing the gazebo, that was REALLY good. And I think you designed the characters BEUTIFULLY! From what I could tell, their personalities were very clear. LOVE THIS BOOK!!! AND AGAIN, PLEASE FINISH IT!!!!

DUDE. I actually love how Loki and Bucky BOTH like her!! lol

Great book so far! The description of the world background could be a bit better, but this is really impressive so far! The story is going at a good pace and I personally think you have done a great job keeping the audience engaged in the story. In a few parts the dialogue got a bit confusing, only a bit though. This is one of my favorite fanfictions so far! I hope you continue writing it! (I can't find anything that will tell me when you last posted. Haha! Maybe it's because I'm using the website.) I definitely recommend!

Wow. I really think you could have made this work without the pedophilia part. There were a few grammatical errors throughout, and the story felt a bit rushed with the relationship area. You didn't do the best job describing the background or the characters very well either. Again, the story in my opinion kind of just felt wrong because of the age gap part. You are a great writer with pretty good ideas, just maybe try to avoid the pedophiles. I did like how you wrote about each of the fake dates, but it got a bit repetitive. Something I would want to see in the future, would be more description in your writing.

This was a really good story! I noticed a few grammar mistakes and it made a really big jump when they kissed in the bathroom. It felt a bit rushed and not thought through very well. other than that it was a great story! Great ideas! I also loved how you switched between POVs and how you were showing the flashbacks. I definitely recommend!

AHHHHHHHH WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?!?!?!? I NEED TO KNOW P.S. I love how you fit the puppy into the book!! This book is ✨perfection✨ There are just a few grammatical errors

oh jeez. that was fast. lol

"No need to know he was gay." HAHAHA

I. LOVE. THIS. BOOK. There are a few grammar mistakes but it's awesome otherwise. YOU ACCUALLY BLEW MY MIND WHEN CHARLY CAME INTO HARRY'S ROOM! AND WHEN LOUIS SAVED HIM! AHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!