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2024-02-29 เข้าร่วมแล้วNew Zealand
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EXOD127 months agoแปะแล้วIts my first book so its pretty rushed im throughly planning for a new one which i hope is better than this one .................................
- EXOD127 months agoตอบกลับถึง AtreyaNK
thank you for the review the characters not being introduced is cause i want to keep an air of mystery around them.
- EXOD127 months agoตอบกลับถึง AtreyaNK
could you please review my book and please be as honest as possible
- EXOD127 months agoแปะแล้ว
good development and also slow paced is good but make sure not to make it to slow paced and also make sure to describe the world background more specifically and update frequently all in all very good
