Jamie_Allen_5021

I love your writing style and I am really enjoying this story. Thank you for your hard work and dedication.🥰

Really enjoyed the overall quality of this story. Also, loved the design and speed of the story. Really well done overall.

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I would love if someone could explain the system as well. Thank you for mentioning it.

Not bed, could use a good editing, switching character names is a bit distracting at times. Switched Damian to Dimitri more then once and typos with Riga’s name change her to Rike and Ruka (not as bad). The story is good and original enough, main character is endearing but secondary characters are a bit flat. Not bad but could benefit by a bit more description even if merely from MC POV. Keep it up.

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