Lema404

eight and a half chapters of filler at the end, and the author hasn't done anything with the story in seven months. This is just another disappointment of an author 😕.

In my honest opinion, this very short chapter could have been halved so that the rest of the chapter could be focused on pushing the story forward.

Okay. At first, I thought that this was going to be a good story, and the premise was interesting. Now, at chapter twenty-three, all I see is a greedy control freak with a lot more issues. In my honest opinion, the mc is just as much a hero as he is a villain with his current and future actions.

fun fact. if you soak the meat in milk with some ice, it removes a lot of the gamey taste of the meat and

TYFTC. Don't let the haters drag you down. The only thing that I think you could improve on is the number of chapters you release a week 😆 . Beyond that, your doing awesome.

bro has already figured out half the equation to eternal happiness 😆

this would have been the perfect place to time skip to where Canon starts

I understood half of what was written. I just can't anymore.

What does a bear hunter have to do with the story ? Is it a part of the mha universe? If not, could you please stop translating idioms and euphemisms? They detract from the story and lower the quality of it.

-The writing quality is ok in some areas, but then, it gets so bad that it literally jerks you out of the story. Add on that this happens either every paragraph or every other paragraph -The story development is common enough that one can infer what is happening by just skimming.'Sick boy gets reborn before in mha before/ after kicking the bucket and -character design up to part four is common and the same as other stories. -Two chapters a week is, in my opinion, pretty weak. Along with how short each chapter is, the bar for expectations keeps getting lower and lower. If this is done for fun, and not a way to better your writing, then ignore the chapter length statement. -The world is already pre-built and established. All the author needs to do is add their OC and a few other things and they have a working FF.