favour_king

i know what you're trying to do and it's great that you've got nailed down which basically is good but I would love to know more about your characters and the people around him, Love the slow paced but your action sence has and need to be detailed giving the reader a full view of what you're trying to express, overall good storyline keep up the good work 👍👍

if you were to be told that a novel like this will grace us you would have laughed at it but what can I say 😔😔 it's by far a novel that has changed my way of reading and searching for novels all I can say is dont' fuck it up for guilty 😉😉