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I'm your regular reader, you know that, but this story has lots of problems. First, the grammar issue- yeah, we can ignore that. My grammar is totally shit; I know that. Second, it feels repetitive; the same lines appear in every chapter, and the same concepts and ideas recur across chapters with only minor wording changes. story looks like it's stuck in the same frame and not moving. It feels more like a business story than a writer's story. Maybe I have no idea about a writer's story, but it's not what it is in 20 chapters. Anyway, it's my honest review. I have read 10 chapters in the last few days, but I have read the whole 10 chapters, and the story is the same as here; it is on 10, and the chapters are too short. Anyway, good luck 👍
Hey, why are your story chapters short compared to your other stories?
Wait, this chapter was very short,
wait, jaganath Mishra was cm with inc I guess, they can remove him if they need
Man, what a long name
What " there always was"?
Leave it, bro. Anytime someone criticises his stories, this guy does the same, giving a long 4-6-paragraph monologue justifying that he's right and anyone who criticises is wrong and immature. Well, he still doesn't understand what critics are for. I gave a low review in his last serial story, and he gave me the same long monologue ,,
well