Divya_Dev

Author you Don't mention cultivation level of character that you introduced just saying they're powerful etc.So mention character cultivation level so we can judge their power

yeh it's feel like he tells us a story it's don't feel like novel at all in last 20 chapter I hardly seen any conversation between two character

Bro story,plot,world building everything is good but it's too slow peace becuse of that it's sometime feel boring like chapter 171-177 has description which if you wish you can wright it 2 chapter but you waste 8 chapter free pass

waste story after reading 29 chapter Whole story is waste

This novel is fucking slow peace it's not for me al the best for this novel

Bro Academy arc now feel dull add some adventure arc in his world or his adventure in another world

is aiden and jack same person or not anyone can tell me

regular one

Bro it's story is good but you write some unimportant words in last few chapter which don't even need like today free Chapter this chapter has no meaning if you wish to write slow peace story write it but your recent chapter was filled meaningless

why he enchanting everyone. Mc don't enchanting himself other than his body. I think you should think unique way to enchant MC