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hey man, i would like to send you some ideas i came up with after reading. i love this book, and I feel like it has a lot of potential. that's why I would love to share my ideas with you, author. Although I know you already have your vision for this book, I can assure you my ideas would not hinder that. normal most Author have a discord server that allows them to build like a community for their book where readers can share ideas, fan drawings, and so on. I am so surprised you don't have one since Discord Channel would help you build a stable relationship between the fans and book you like them sharing their own fan fiction drawings of your story, you know, giving the story a sense of community try it, it really helps
The author all asks for is you Discord or something where I can send the draft of my idea to fix the minor problems and loop holes, I just want you to read my idea for the the arc to fix the loop holes and if you don't like my idea after reading then you can just ignore it but there is no harm on reading it I can't find you discord anywhere if not i would have sent it by now but I believe this might the book need for it true potential to shine like diamond it is.
Author Please don't give up this book I have read it and it terms Potential this books has high of a potential as Shadow slave and if not Shadow slave then the top 10 or even top 5 stories on the golden ticket in terms of world building, Plot, Power system and Scaling yes even the story plot and set up is top teir the problem you getting with this book only lies in a few area which was able to spot I also would like to point them out thankfully the story mistake can still be fixed and I have wrote down a detailed plan on how to fix all the mistakes in the this story in fell swoop and slap all the critics in the face as well as as amassing a strong fan base and this Hiatus seems to be a perfect time to set up and fix the entire problem in one fell swoop and gain your rightful place in the top 10. I was wondering i could get your discord so I can send my ideas if you feel that it won't you can ignore my Idea after reading it but if not then I believe the next arc would be the turn around this story need. I would have sent my idea here I don't feel like it's ideal please Author consider it 🙏. at least just read my idea and make a decision for yourself It very hard to find good books on web novel now adays and it pains my heart to see one with so much potential go to waste just like that
Too All the Critc on this book, You all keep forgetting that the MC and FL are supposed to be 18 years who practically have no live experience or childhood to speak of, and you expect them to be some all-knowing, sagely and perfect MC but to me I think the author is not wrong the MC is supposed to flawed make mistakes contradict himself and learns as he goes he lived 17 years alone as a glorified slave and wondering when his next meal would come instead of actually being a child and then a teenager so obviously those traits would show up now it can be clearly seen that his actions his him try to over compensate all the things he missed. and as for him trusting Mira so soon again, like I said before, they are children with no experience to how relationship work no ever told them about proper communication and all that, your problem is that you were looking for some edgy kid who uses lies and deceit go through like which does not make sense because at the end of the day regardless of how much power they have the are still kids you are saying Mira is unlikable and all that nonsense because she spied on him but ask yourself what do you expect a child who knows practically nothing about normal relationships, talkless of romantic relationship to do she spied on him because the cared and as bad as spying it can be seen clearly as she did it because she didn't know better and thankfully she was properly educated that all the MC and FL needs proper adult guidance before they become to powerful to consider it for now regardless of all their power and talent they are still children and just children but teenagers with raging hormones and even worst they never got release those hormones all and are doing it at once now.
You all keep forgetting that the MC and FL are supposed to be 18 years who practically have no live experience or childhood to speak of, and you expect them to be some all-knowing, sagely and perfect MC but to me I think the author is not wrong the MC is supposed to flawed make mistakes contradict himself and learns as he goes he lived 17 years alone as a glorified slave and wondering when his next meal would come instead of actually being a child and then a teenager so obviously those traits would show up now it can be clearly seen that his actions his him try to over compensate all the things he missed
yh, but saving everyone comes at a cost of his freedom and signing his life as pawn when he knows how much potential he has and even has the potential to surpass even the highest life forms in the Galaxy given enough time but agreeing to the overseers is like cutting his journey short before it even began. People need to understand that Alex is still 18 and had barely lived his life. Even his 17 years before awakening, he spent it living as a glorified slave and now that he finally has his own free will again after 1 year, you say he should go back to the life of a glorified slave for the rest of his life just so he can save people who has nothing to do with him since he started suffering from the age of 5 when he was alone up to his 17. I know these people are fictional characters, and all that, but people who keep criticizing the author should sit down and ask them self what they would do if they were in the MC shoes and if they were half as reasonable at the age of 18
technically, he and Mira were the reason, so he was one of the reasons, but it best as the wise once said you brag big or go home
What about the king class beast core and soul orb
or she can try to combine her golden presence with her energy condensation technique if I remember clearly her energy condensation technique give her a higher amount of energy than any other technique and her golden presence technique improves her energy and capabilities by alot so if she had practiced her energy condensation technique in her golden presence form although the backlash might be bad in the beginning but might bring a shit load of benefits in the long run for one her golden presence might evolve to maybe divine presence (just a random name) or due to practicing the energy technique with her golden presence the energy her body might get might end up being at least 3 to 4 times her expected amount. training and unending hunting is not enough to reach the level of someone like Alex. What one needs is outside the box thinking because if she continues to gain strength the conventional way as everyone else without out of the box thinking or using one imagination, she would never reach or surpass Alex who has a golden finger to rely on even if she became a divine beast level awaken it would not be enough. I doubt that the system tells everyone that their potential is limitless because for one potential to be limitless, it's just like saying that her growth has no limit and if she can utilize her potential more than Alex can do his then she can surpass and ife she can truly tap into her potential then keeping up or not being far behind with Alex in the long run Is not impossible. Limitless potential means an opportunity for limitless growth, and divine beast class is a limit regardless of how high it is, meaning there are other unique paths for her growth in addition to the classification class she just has to find it a little elbow grease and imagination
but the system said she had limitless potential and an exceptional talent towards the space element, so may be coming in contact with the space element monster would help like monsters in the void or void related techniques