FairyKitty

How to resolve the novel in one sentence: "N-No I don't d-deserve s-s-someone like you"

Men definitely suck

yea like just feed the human baby to the cubs

You could also just write "lunatic cultist scum"

My comment affects the next sentence, too. Why the hell is this guy shouting out everyone's job, where the secret stronghold is and what his name is?

In my opinion, you can't say "It's not heavy however its defense was very high" since they are both positives. However means "in contrary to" It would be: "The armor wasn't heavy and it's defense was high"

I suppose. I guess since Jiraya could make Naruto practically S rank in two years it's not impossible for him to do it to Seija either, considering she was trained by her Jonin mother sincea an early age as well. (Not to mention her past life training experience and insight)

Feels a bit underwhelming, the fighting itself was well written but the fact that Seija is already Jonin level kinda pushes it in my opinion. Not impossible considering Itachi, but definitely not #weaktostrong tag

Might be a reincarnator? Not too sure. Who could it be, though?

quick google search tells me he is an akatsuki founding member