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This is one of the best fanfics I’ve ever read. Despite having a lot, and I mean a lot, of racist jokes, it's still very good. And congratulations on the impeccable translation as well.
So far, in chapter 13, I think the story is good, just a bit confusing. I also found the main character very weak for someone who transmigrated to the Marvel Universe with comic book beings. Other than that, the story is on a very good path, and I will continue reading, hoping that it develops better in the upcoming chapters.
You could have arranged a meeting between them without making the MC seem useless. I don't know if it's just me, but I'm finding this story very fast and confusing.
This seems to be going in a direction I don't like, I hope it's not what I'm imagining.
Dude, I'm really enjoying this fanfic! The storyline is engaging, and the characters are well-developed, I'm excited to see where it goes next!