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the scheming is overly complicated. he's not even joining the sect, he's applying to join a group of people who are loosely connected to someone from the sect who may or may not have the pull to get him into the sect. Not to mention that the group itself has been robbed a bunch recently so it's dangerous AF and the martial arts you know to keep yourself safe is negligible. And you're supposed to owe him for this bullshit favor which you had to pay for, again. I know iIsaid it was good that he knew cultivation techniques and it made sense considering he was a history major. But that does not translate to fighting technique. Especially with a sword. The swindler only taught you boxing techniques which even you admitted were shit. so where the fuck did the sword skill come from? And why are you all of a sudden adequate in fighting?
First he actually has a reason for having gotten the technique(s) he was a history major. Also i get the feeling that somehow he could only practice it to some effect coz of that other world
this is probably the most well thought out definition of what a real fight would be like. The kid id strong in his own right, we've already been shown that by his prowess lifting up fish nets, being robust, but even then, even with quick lime to blind his opponent, a random ass bandit nearly killed him and he still hasn't recovered. Damn
i get that character building is impoertant but all that was just useless. Just bloody start
is everyone else japanese ecxept for the MC?
there's nothjing to butter up and he literally just told you what was gonna happen. Also what kinda idiot would think a world of swords and magic, counted as an upside? I know we all love those kinds of stories but lets be real, if you've ever seen war on tv and felt fear when you werent even there, you're screwed in a world like this. If you never felt anticipation to be one of them soldiers fightign and dying, swords and magic is not for you. If you've never gone hungry had to deal with stale hard bread, you're not surviving inthis kinda world.
It started out well enough then it just got weird, chatgpt. Thats basically the only thought that came to mind. The grammar is ok but the flow is just so robotic, artificial even, IT feels forced
she did, she definitely did
who the fuck is emily
that is probably the sanest comment ever, he's trying too hard to be in the background and he sucks at it. And most importantly i dont even know why he's hiding his strength, it's juts soooo stupid