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Mr_Myeterious2dตอบกลับถึง OceanbrezzeWhere would you be posting it then? Would it be free or paid?
Adrian didn't take it, instead he swallowed and silently followed after, hyper aware of how his shoes clicked overly loudly in the hallways. A few students saw them in the corridors, already whispering and gossiping although none of them looked surprised.- Mr_Myeterious2dตอบกลับถึง Oceanbrezze
After that what are you gonna try? Try Some anime like One-piece, Naruto etc
Adrian didn't take it, instead he swallowed and silently followed after, hyper aware of how his shoes clicked overly loudly in the hallways. A few students saw them in the corridors, already whispering and gossiping although none of them looked surprised. - Mr_Myeterious2dแปะแล้ว
The story is undoubtedly good. But I don't like the Main Character. He has a trauma that no one needs him and everyone is going to abandon him so all the time he is trying to please his adopted father i.e Voldemort. There is no character development till now at start he was insecure, and Now is insecure. I don't know about the future. But I may not continue reading as if he remains the same. I like how he knows he can't go against Dumbledore or any other professor. But he is always cowering and crying about the unfairness of life. He had anger issues, insecurities, jealousy, and submitting quality. He is well verse in spells and yet he is mediocre against Draco while cannon Harry didn't back down against Voldemort.
- Mr_Myeterious2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
why you are behind his poor soul. Always making him pathetic. Leave him alone and let him enjoy sometime and what is crying and tears about. He will always cry. Honestly I think you hate him as such you are making him like Draco Malfoy always ready to knell or cry in front of others. Okay I will wait til 45 chapters only
Adrian didn't take it, instead he swallowed and silently followed after, hyper aware of how his shoes clicked overly loudly in the hallways. A few students saw them in the corridors, already whispering and gossiping although none of them looked surprised. - Mr_Myeterious2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Why is he so afraid, you should give him some guts. he is like a headless chicken.
"Huh?" Moody asked, rising to stand and peer down at Adrian with a curl of his mouth, "Who are you working for? Didn't know scum started at your age." - Mr_Myeterious2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Hey I like this one please don't make him pathetic again
"Anger makes you look ugly," Luna stiffened for a small second, twiddling a strand of her hair between her fingers. A draft of wind blew in through the hollow windows, tugging on Adrian's hair and sending a shiver through his spine. He twisted his wand, nearly shaking as he quietly cast a warming charm over his shoulders. - Mr_Myeterious2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
His character is annoying. He is always targeting a weaker opponent or something. He wants to go on a raid and yet he gets hit by Draco. Really this is gonna change like you informed earlier because I can't handle such persanality for long before I quit.
There was something horrifyingly satisfying about kicking and hitting something pliant and giving. Something obscenely muggle and crude about it all, but so positively wonderful. - Mr_Myeterious2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I don't like his complexion but that's what makes it different
Perhaps father is involved, and he thought you too useless to be of help. - Mr_Myeterious2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Again anger issue
Then it switched to pity, and Adrian temper flared like the angry maw of a Chinese Fireball. His magic didn't react, but his fist did. It was painfully muggle, and he had no practice with melee combat to begin with; his knuckles cracked loudly and his thumb ground against his bone, threatening to snap. Skylar's jaw snapped to the side, but Adrian suspected he had done more damage to himself than to the Golden Boy. - Mr_Myeterious2dตอบกลับถึง Oceanbrezze
40*2
There was a primal instinct, something deep in Adrian's core which simply whispered to him that he should move. That he should help. Call it humanity, call it his fear for someone who tentatively was his friend- his first friend. - Mr_Myeterious2dตอบกลับถึง Oceanbrezze
That would be correct, but you mentioned revenge so I assumed
Millicent finally noticed that she had gained something over Adrian. She beamed, looking thoroughly impressed with herself. She walked away with her head held high. - Mr_Myeterious2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
He is really annoying. Why is he so pathetic.
But first, learning a Patronus Charm could help, no matter how unfair he felt the tradeoff was. - Mr_Myeterious2dตอบกลับถึง Oceanbrezze
How much?
There was a primal instinct, something deep in Adrian's core which simply whispered to him that he should move. That he should help. Call it humanity, call it his fear for someone who tentatively was his friend- his first friend. - Mr_Myeterious2dตอบกลับถึง Oceanbrezze
You should be,
He was the one who deserved it, not that selfish brat who had everything-' - Mr_Myeterious3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Really he had already ordered his familiar to kill a boy before
'But was it murder?' A voice prompted him, soothing away his horror, 'You were only a bystander. You didn't kill her, after all, starvation did.' - Mr_Myeterious3dตอบกลับถึง Oceanbrezze
it's already the third year. when it was mentioned it was dark I thought it was for Potter's but now it seems like his life is miserable. First he has that mental or what about being trauma of being accepted or praised. He should have grown up till now.
He felt bile twist and surge against his throat, stinging his chest painful enough tears welled in his eyes. He forced it down, gagging on the acrid taste as his knuckles curled and he struggled to ease his breathing. - Mr_Myeterious3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
how there were only one sink
He had rushed to the washroom in question, peering at all of the sinks but he hadn't found any symbol for a snake. He still hadn't managed to get to the chamber. - Mr_Myeterious3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I know but there is a reason why Madra and Sukuna were strong. Because they keep cool headed. If they were in a fight or something else his weakness to such words would be exploited. He may be dark, maybe some other things but that doesn't matter except he shouldn't bow to anyone and if he is a total villain then don't make him sympathise or anything else. Make him a proper villain like Do flamingo
Millicent finally noticed that she had gained something over Adrian. She beamed, looking thoroughly impressed with herself. She walked away with her head held high. - Mr_Myeterious5dตอบกลับถึง Thananos
Really bro, all higher up knows
Fun Question: Does the World Government and The Marines know about the existence of the Sky Islands? - Mr_Myeterious5dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
best
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