Doonie_Devourer

After I read more it made more sense

Where did this dude go to school

If this guys has 1 percent chance why is he only getting 6 percent if he survives that’s gonna be the dance of his life right there lol atleast 10 percent plus I foresee his friend/family/teacher dying here

Yo why is she the female lead if she behaving like a complete bitch I hope that fl mean antagonist

+1

There is a couple. Errors here but I love this so far

How can you write something like this without cringing I wish I had this ability

😂😂 you wannabe geto

mans broke the fourth wall bc of fear

it's not the over explaining that's the problem i have still read on but it's like spoiling his potential cuz imo it just sounded like truth was buttering him up like give him his powers and send him off let him figure it out let him struggle but by telling him I'm gonna think oh snap this mc gonna be arrogant or he gonna have everything easy even when that's not true