Lonelythree

It's because that's what sells. You might find it hard to believe but that's what is hot selling. Since many do this doesn't mean every author is an idiot. You can take another example. If you read fl lead book you will find lot of bad boy mc.It's because many of them like bad-boy vibes. Your taste just varies.

He did

Thanks for the review.This was my first time writing a bit serious story with too many characters or things so I might made a mistake. I will try to improve.

First thing. The top one doesn't care about the bottom. Second, since it's God dominated world with lot of church.Healing is easy with money.any cut part can be stitched. If you read further you get the feel. Cutting organs is a minor thing and can be treated easily with spells.Higher priest can even regenerate organs but not the head

No ntr or yuri.

It is...But this one isn't morally right. He kills anyone who pisses him off. Unlike Kael, he doesn't have justice drama. Also, do you like the story? Any feedback? Also, can you give a review

Thanks, buddy. I liked your review. I haven't read Hunter Academy but many commented on it so I read it and yeah, it was a coincidence but the character style overlaps with it. Also about the fourth wall breaking. I made a very big mistake by writing in the first POV. It isn't my cup of tea but I wanted to try it inspired by Entrail books. And with ongoing books switching from TPOV and FPOV is a hassle. As for other things, it was also true. Quite a helpful review.

If you look carefully she is just a spoiled brat whom isn't even level to be called Kael's enemy but someone around her is..

It's a wraith

He waiting for more development.Like this guy is real Walter or not.You see the bodies are already under going analysis. It won't be dragged much.I have already finished Tycoon in the draft already.Around more 10 chaps to go