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This seems to be a pretty right story normally I wouldn’t read a story with a female protagonist because most people can’t make good stories with female protagonist and also I mean this in the least sexiest way possible I just can’t get behind behind a story with a female protagonist most of the time mainly because a lot of the times when it’s a female protagonist, it’s a dude who turned into a girl it’s kinda like how you can like bacon but not like every other part of a pig. I know it’s a pretty bad analogy but still I just have an innate dislike towards fanfic or novels with female embassies, but I’m gonna give this one a try because it’s a military/historical book and from the little bit that I’ve read plus the reviews. It seems to be a good book.

For right now, this seems to be almost an exact copy of a book. Someone quite a while ago called House of venom. I feel like the author should at least give credit and also I don’t really care if you copied it as long as you changed the story at least. Because I’ve read that entire story and I’m not going to keep reading this one if all you’ve done is just change a few words around.

This fanfic is pretty good. Keep up the good work.

Please continue this book it’s really good and I really love Warhammer 40 K books so please continue because there are a lot of good Warhammer 40 K books out there but they only have a few chapters so please at least try to get this book to 50 chapters please. And keep up the good work.😊👍

I’m first

Where have you been

Fair point

These two chapters were pretty good but in my opinion they’re a little short, but other than that they’re good keep up work