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Only_Fanfictions3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วSkill issue
"CUM 10 TIMES IN 24 HOURS?! THAT'S NOT POSSIBLE!"- Only_Fanfictions4dแปะแล้ว
Pretty good. Nothing much to critique other than how fast Marcus gets OP, but if the author is going for a more character heavy focus like I think: then that will work very much in their favor…just to get the grinding for levels out of the way as soon as possible. I look forward to seeing where this goes :)
- Only_Fanfictions21dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
If you’re asking for original jutsu? 1) some kind of hard light ninjutsu technique that creates illusion like objects/terrain ei: trees, bushes, houses, roads, swords etc. except for the lack of any smell or taste and the fact they are made of chakra (sensors and dojutsu hard counter it) they are indistinguishable from the real thing, plus they’re as fragile as tempered glass so no infinite weapon glitches. The upper limits and shortcomings are ultimately up to you but I think these are pretty good. 2) Some kind of Yin and/or Yang + Fire style explosive jutsu, like the phoenix flower jutsu but with a bangIf you’re asking for original jutsu? 1) some kind of hard light ninjutsu technique that creates illusion like objects/terrain ei: trees, bushes, houses, roads, swords etc. except for the lack of any smell or taste and the fact they are made of chakra (sensors and dojutsu hard counter it) they are indistinguishable from the real thing, plus they’re as fragile as tempered glass so no infinite weapon glitches. The upper limits and shortcomings are ultimately up to you but I think these are pretty good. 2) Some kind of Yin and/or Yang + Fire style explosive jutsu kind of like the phoenix flower Jutsu but with a bang If your asking for more cannon stuff: hiding like a mole and water prison are all time greatest low level jutsu that I still stand by
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Only_Fanfictions24dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
The team dynamics are cool for sure
Do you think this dynamic is cool, or does it seem lame to you? - Only_Fanfictions1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I think a hidden blade like from ac3 would work very well
Many great suggestions in the comments like a katana or kusarigama, but no, it's going to be a unique custom-made weapon which I am going to keep hidden because I want to see all your wild ideas in the comments. - Only_Fanfictions1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Hey, what can I say? I like kids," Asuma responded, then immediately winced at how his words sounded out loud.
- Only_Fanfictions1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"That time I broke my arm?" Asked Izuku.
- Only_Fanfictions1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Why is this chapter so short???
Outside of UA - Only_Fanfictions1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วMatthew struggled free even as he felt a pair of metal feet mount on his chest and began pummeling his face, making him loose hold over his breath and take in a good chunk of the water. He lurched in anger, rising up from the water and flinging a cyborg away while another 2 clung to his chest and legs.
- Only_Fanfictions2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Uncle Iroh’s belly is a prison, and its only prisoner… is tea
The guards on the iroh prison walls seemed to notice them approaching as an alarm sounded from afar and there seemed to be more people and movement on the walls. - Only_Fanfictions2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วI saw both agents about to raise a word of complaint, but I shut them both down. "While I appreciate your fucking candour, the demons don't play around. I've been fighting them all day; all it takes is a swing. I like you both a little too much to risk that. Rin will sub in for both of you. When the kid gets cooking, no one can compete, not even me. Trust me, it's the demons that should be afraid."
- Only_Fanfictions2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Can we get much higher ?
(vote with your stones and help us rank higher) - Only_Fanfictions2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 60 Khufu, the Mouth of Deisceart
- Only_Fanfictions2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
And so it begins…
The Covenant retreated back to their ship and fled the planet. - Only_Fanfictions2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Shit yourself."
- Only_Fanfictions2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
This sentence is repeated
Give them the chance to look it over for a little while before I explain things. - Only_Fanfictions2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Ah, yes... Yes, I am," Yuta replied with a little hesitation on his face.
- Only_Fanfictions2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
He didn’t confirm it
Wait, did Sarutobi confirm that he would change Naruto's last name in the end, or did I overlook it? - Only_Fanfictions2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Spider-Man
That teddy bear hadn't only given him one of the best opportunities of his life, but he even remembered the hyphen. - Only_Fanfictions2mthแปะแล้ว
This whole fiction has been written by GPT and it’s so obvious. If not for the fact that it seems like the author is a motive English speaker I would’ve dropped this sooner. Aside from that there where no original ideas or interesting character developments if that wasn’t enough to drop it then the basic bl+c# system to get op quick ruins any chance. 1/5
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