Mela7

In chapter 2, you told us he was why of confronting Fei about his supposed emotions then you proceeded to tell us they were actually in a relationship...I got confused you painted a picture where they didn't know each other Minor grammar and tense tweaks Beautiful story you rock💜

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You obviously did your research And I absolutely adore Greek Gods so I'm going to love this And Thanatos is totally bad ass Great job Btw Alex hates you 😏😏

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Good start The beginning was very good I mean who doesn't love a war story Good writing The chapters are kind of on the long side but amazing work

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It's good just minor adjustments Lyra is from a family of 5...not 3. She has 2 siblings plus her parents except they're dead Well she most definitely did not need to die like that but good job Solid English solid plot solid emotion building You rock