Kang_Minrin
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are you using these names because of international reader them it's good otherwise change the name to Korean namesand please use an attractive covercover have influence too somehowbut remember you need to follow every of others advice just do as your heart says
If you are writing K because it's fiction it's okay but please edit the sentence structure
at . please edit it all mistakes will be edited
don't right 28 right after full stop
K is Korea
so you have made
I mean change said to replied
kimla replied and headed to
sister but you never introduced
Alvin was 18.. .. .
hahaha I like this
don't add with with again and again rather use comma
please fix this sentence . You have the beauty to be a model but why did you choose military. something like that roughly
Fix it like she was 23 with these features . don't write kimla age it's kinda awkward in my point of view
Busan in Korea ?
a true hallyu wave lover
oh I didn't consider that . right I should right my lady