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Why is it Vealor and not Vaelor?

Bro, that’s not how stamina works at all.…your in a new body, stamina is a combination of multiple things, muscle fatigue(which would be horrible because of muscle mass), the ability of your lungs to get the necessary oxygen you need, your hearts ability to pump blood fast enough, and simply your mental ability.

Sadly by that time China already had cannons. Europe didn’t have much technology at all. Gunpowder was made in China in the 9th century, by that time England was still struggling to have a successful nation

Shouldn’t it be doux?

Rex is Roman, it should be Basileus because it’s Greek

I swear , wasn’t a big thing about saiyans is that they were rather emotionally ignorant. Like they grew up in a rigid and unfeeling manner and Bardock and Gine were considered weird. It’s also why Gohan and Goten, or pretty much all the half saiyans were able to achieve super saiyan so easily because strong emotions which facilitate the transformation. Same thing with Cabba and Caulifla

This is what I mean, the grammar has been distorted out of No where

Your grace is reserved for the king and queen. It should be my prince or prince baelon. Also,what the heck is with the grammar, it starts off fine but then it slowly devolves. Like literally, the last chapter was nigh unreadable

This is solid but there are two major glaring problems. One is the odd time jumps, I understand why it’s there but I don’t think it should be as big as it is. And next is the biggest problem holding this back, updates. One chapter a week is awful. It helps that the chapters are so long but at least 2 or 3 chapters a week is would seriously improve the story

No she’s not, The Cannibal was in Westeros before Aegon even came, he was born there, he’s bigger than Vhagar as well.