I’m starting over, I suggest you reread from the beginning if you haven’t already.

Alright, I’ll make a few Adjustments….

Well yeah definitely wasn’t going for a romantic vibe in that particular scene, I just didn’t know how to express it without ruining the mood…. I was thinking maybe I could say “I need you!” Or “I can’t live without you.” But these felt even more…. Awkward you know?

Give me a second!!!!!! 😩

Simply wonderful, as I scroll through this novel, I feel a calming sensation washing over me, to read such peak fiction is totally poggers, it’s giving grade A effort. Many books have failed to capture the essence of what did book just radiates, if I could erase my memory, and reread this masterpiece, I would have done it so many times, that my mind would have been lobotomized, and even then, I’d still read this Magnum opus of a novel, it is simply too tier yo.