Facez_
It me,Facez. I love to review many,many novels, fanfics and support many Authors that create a lot of story that we enjoyed and probably bad mouth on a story that irk with some stupid logic,instead u can just go tell me 'It plot armor' that work ya know!? and if that story is good and I myself like it I will draw fanart for u!! it good!?
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i think u introduce teams play too soon. in the beginning I just want to know more about MC, how he be this strong,what he have that make him MC of this story,what set him apart form the rest players. and romantic relationships too, I thought u would build some soil posanality of the characters before progress to a romantic arc or something
give it more details in fighting scenes bro, u wrote it like aftermath of battle instead of some action
more!
Thx for the chapter
he starts to babysit Ethan and basically goes with the flows of the story. he knows there is more of a demons contacter in school yet he is not doing anything to bring them out at all. he just waits for the opportunity to come instead of making one and when someone gonna try to attack him directly or indirectly he just standing there doing nothing to 'gather more information ' like in the mine arc. he just leave the seeds of problems alone. and recently u focus on romantic relationships with many girls but with the way u make mc posanality composed, introvert want to be alone,don't care about how people's think of him. it just ruin story bro
because Maya treated him the way his dear sister does so it doesn't count bro. and he became more open in volume 2 or 3. every character got their personalities,not like some novel that basically forced Extra to become a star in one night. The one,only downside is that he is hiding his ability and he rather chooses to use indirect methods in some cases and original MC or whoever came get his credit,yeah I hate it alright! BUT I understand the way of his thinking. his ultimate goal is REVENGE so he'll use everything to achieve that like, hiding his abilities but not so suspicious it not those novels MC's that just want to hide their power for punny reasons so I told u. give it a try bro.
It's just a gamer system boi. u system don't have anything unique
bro the manhwa u chose is trash!! I have read it novel til 1100+. it just one of Manhwas that have a ton of plot armour and Author want a MC reach a godhood with divide energy and with the Chaos fuckin shit. with the north sea to took a hold of jin father cause he too OP. and the very reason is that he ruin my dante! and he ruined the world! what a husband, his wife is being eaten inside out by chaos but what where jin father?! the Author that wrote that novel just wants to prolong a story so it won't end. year Trash manhwa.
he said ' Chaka available for everyone to use ' no?
eh and why there are civilians in naruto tho and daimyos can just raise their own shinobis not go hire some hidden villages as create it basically inverted it in one go on other hand hire hidden villages there is no 100% royalty just one of their missions
again with root excuse to hide Mc power. just go to the academy, perform good enough to cast a three hokage eyes, find a good sensei and form connection .