ToffyPomx2

The transitions of scenes is good. but it could be even more better. Over all, the story is great 😘The cliffhanger is killing me 😭 i wonder what's gonna happened next? When's the next update?

I really like this chapter ♥️

Thanks for the update. Keep up the good work author san 😘 begging for more update

Oh. So that is the meaning of 1st And 2nd baptims. hmm. This is the first time i read something like this.

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LOVE IT! THE WRITING IS QUITE DONE WELL AND THERES A FEW WRONG SPELLING BUT IT IS STILL READABLE. CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW SHE GATHER SUPPLIES.HEHE AUTHOR PLEASE UPDATE MORE

I think so....