Keendrik

for people who didn't like the sudden change between the fight and the village description. this was done on purpose and will be a developed topic from the chapters

This is my first novel, so please be patient. In the beginning, I want to publish at least 5 chapters per week. The themes are: martial arts, adventure, fantasy and drama. I do not intend to romance at least for now. the development will be gradual. I thank everyone who gives it a chance and thank you!!

very good

I didn't like the protagonist's attitude

that is good

where is the academy?

I liked

So far so good

Só tem 1 capítulo, porém promete, eu já pensei em 1 milhão de maneiras de melhoras algumas coisas, a ortografia não e das melhores, o personagem principal parece ser meio broxa mais se esse autor se empenhar da pra deixar essa novel MT boa, provavelmente vai ter mais d 200 cap

mina chata do cacete tmnc