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Bananas on Pancakes - MASJ: https://open.spotify.com/playlist/1jIhW3uEtedo7vX4Rk0myn?si=cf79ae88b57e43ef
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Now that I re-read what I wrote, I can see how there could be the implication that just Mara is going to sleep with someone else and essentially cheat on El. Both El and Mara will be willingly involved in the Lemon, but I figured that since it's alien + girl + girl, even with a space alien, it should have the Yuri tag. For any Lemons in the future, it will always involve El and Mara. They're each other's number 1 priority, and I wouldn't want to split them up. I would also feel like 1 is cheating on the other ❤️
I believe so, or at least something along those lines. It definitely sounds like something he would say 😂
That's a good point, actually. I would like to say that the pass has a chip in it that requires scanning, but I later explain that El inherited Carnage's technopathy, so that's also out the window. For now, assume that Mara forgot about Carnage's technopathy, when she was planning her entrance, until she was later reminded about it by El. I'll add this to the list of things I need to correct when I re-write the first 10 or so chapters once I've improved a little more. Thank you for pointing this out, I appreciate it ❤️
Appreciate the feedback, I'll try to keep it in mind going forward ❤️
She was transmigrated from her Earth in 2022, so would be around Multiverse of Madness. I know Loki came out in 2021, but with how messed up it makes the movies prior to it, with all the timeline plotholes, I've decided to take the route of ignoring it. Endgame is another can of worms that I don't even want to try logically explain because it's such a mess. But basically, I don't plan to do the time travel stuff in Endgame 'cause of how nonsensical it is, so that means the Loki show wouldn't happen due to him not getting the Tesseract since the Avengers never went back in time to fumble it.
I've already got a nickname, which will be mentioned in the next chapter, but I plan to throw in a reference to this at some point. It's too funny not to.
I dunno if I'll do a full chapter, but maybe half of one would be pretty fun to write about. I'll keep a record of every new flavour I introduce, and when I've done enough of them, I'll dedicate half a chapter where Mara talks with the chefs behind the snacks. Maybe like 10 or so flavours and their rankings ❤️
Thanks for the feedback. I want to say that I have no plans of dropping it anytime soon, but 90% of the authors probably think that before they drop a novel, so it's not exactly reassuring. I'll just say that I also hate it when a good novel gets dropped, so provided nothing major happens in my life, I won't drop it, or I will at least communicate how long a potential hiatus will be. Do you mind commenting on the weird parts in the chapters? I don't mean to call you out or anything, it's just chances are if you've found something weird; others have also found it weird but have just stopped reading rather than let me know what they didn't like in it. Thanks for the review, and I hope you enjoy what there is of the story so far ❤️
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It's a saying to mean that no decision has been made on the subject. Basically saying that there's no proof Thor is a God and not just an alien that humans thought was a God
I don't believe so. In the comics, the first time Thor heard of one was when Venom took over his body. And in the MCU, a Klyntar hasn't been officially introduced yet so there hasn't been any mention of him knowing about them. I still need to research a little to see if Odin or Heimdall are aware of them, but if I can't find a definitive answer, I'll assume no one is aware of them