sazawa01
I like anime, that one LN and that one WN.
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sazawa0124dตอบกลับถึง Kavin_Kvhes hinting at genderbender later on in the story...
Screaming at the top of her lungs, again Nova's eyes almost popped out of their sockets, but a strange tremor spread throughout her body.- sazawa0130dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
its so obvious. 3-17 = -14 😶
Intelligence: 3-17 - sazawa011mthตอบกลับถึง Dark_B
its -13
Intelligence: 1-14 - sazawa011mthตอบกลับถึง GIL_372
i THINK THAT IS itlaiy
[Sistema De Muertes recommends you register to gain access to all the functions of the System]. - sazawa011mthแปะแล้ว
The writing is very good. No grammatical errors. But I do think it could use some paragraph maintenance cause it might get hard to read sometimes. The characters are also quite remember able. When ever I read wn's with Chinese names I legitimately forget 99% of the names. But you can expect the characters in this to be engrained into your memory. Its quite refreshing to see this kind of unique story. I am yet to read all of the chapters, but hopefully the author continues uploading.
- sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Hes very quick in understanding the situation
"So that's my new name in this life…" he thought. - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
What?? this author cant even finish his own scentences 🤦♂️🤦♂️
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
so bad story. TOO CLICHE!
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
this is so cliche bro so bad
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
omg why so many info dumps please author get better writing skills!
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
u cant figure out potential in just 4 year old kid! so unreaslistic.
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
this is so bad omg. There is bad english and no coherency at all!
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
If it were any good assassins they would finish the kill even if it meant being caught. BAD WRITING
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
how did bro use emojis on webnovel. correct me if im wrong???
"Sure honey, I will." I washed my hands and took a 🚿 shower. I was thinking why I am such a trash 🗑️. I got out of the shower and prepared dinner. - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
this overreactor 😑
"Yes, I mean, I'm sorry, it's not so… Oh." My mother put her hand to her mouth as she suddenly realised the implications of what Myra was saying. "But… but he has no… I mean, I though, hoped it would manifest later, sometimes that happens. I mean, I was happy just to have a child… I…" She staggered over to the chair I was still standing on, lifted me up, and slumped down into it, sitting me on her lap. - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
kinda weird tho. since when did 13 y/o's have such big bubs?
"As you say Miss Myra," I said, resting against her chest and luxuriating in it. "Oh, please take my book back." - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
the info dump 😅 forgive me for skimming this 🙏
In any case, to use magic, one had to channel the mana, and to do that you had to visualise the task in a certain way to create a spell. Spells were of five levels. Base, low, medium, high and ultra. Base spells were really low level things, using a tiny amount of mana, such as creating a spark, and nearly anyone could do this. However, more powerful spells needed more energy, more mana, and this is where people differed. Those with higher power, and hence higher ability, could channel more mana at once. Controlling this mana grew exponentially harder, with only a very rare mage being powerful enough to try ultra level spells, so the use of incantations was needed at some point. Usually, more powerful wizards could cast some medium levels spells without the need to incant, but beyond that, the spell usually needed to be spoken, and more powerful spells still needed hand movements too. These allowed the caster to channel the mana and shape it to their will. However, of course, these incantations meant the spell took longer to cast, and in a time critical situation, such as a battle, this could be fatal. - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
bubs
Myra was cute. I drooled when I first saw her, mentally at least. She was human, petite, but with quite a nice pair of boobs on her, even at her age. When I sat on her lap, I took great pleasure in resting my head on those lovely cushions. I know, a pervert toddler. She was pretty too, with large brown eyes, a button nose and dark hair, cut short. - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Theo door
And I found out my own name too! It took me longer than you would think, because they tended to call me pet names, like 'sweetie' and so on, but finally, when they introduced me to a visitor, I discovered my name in this life was Theodore. I quite liked the choice, although I'm sure people would call me Theo most of the time. Our family name was Helmage, which I thought sounded cool. Apparently in this world, or this country of this world, when couples married, they could choose either a name from one side or the other, or create a totally new one. This was a mixture from both my mother's names. - sazawa011mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
What do u mean homophobic 🤭
Only then did I remember Dex had said my parents, plural, were here, which meant I had two mothers! So, this world was okay with that kind of thing. Not a problem at all for me, I was never homophobic. Plus, both my mothers were hot!