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Re-Review up to C87: This novel is 60% good story & 40% stupid design just to make plot points. Author's design has lots of flaws created so that make the MC's IQ drops at the right time to make a plot points, then makes her smarter afterwards. But also at times it just ruins the moment of a good progressive story. The Uploader used Machine Translation for this story from some other website, so it has lots of issues with translation & after 50 chapters, it gets worse with repeating sentences, left over website data from the site it came from and words cut off between lines.
She might not need it, but to her family who is watching it being given away is probably screaming it in their minds about it. Since they had it hard & to them that was something they could sell to make life easier.
I have plenty of patience when it comes to a story I like. Since I know that some writers this is a hobby or they have other worldly commitments that can effect the release of chapters as they also wish not to rush their work. I have a few other stories I follow where they are only releasing once a month, some might have a sudden inspiration & put out chapters weekly, only to take a couple months break to envision the path ahead for the characters. I've even had a couple stop for a year & then start releasing, as they built up their chapters. So it's in my library to always let me know when a new chapter is released.
Bah!! Dude has over 100 women , not that he needs more, so these others should move on & Ely should not get involved, he obviously doesn’t have time for them or his others if he keeps adding more. He better not make any moves on Ely. She has her family, that’s all she needs.
I would maybe try to keep them together. Right now she already is separated from the first 2 members taken from her & this way she still has some company. But on the other hand, if they split & she comes across another worthy person to join the family to expand and maybe bring in another aspect or direction if needed for adjustment of the story as you invision. Either way can be done, it’s more of how you feel the story is progressing to your vision.
Review at 32 chapters in. So far it's been a very enjoyable & interesting story to read as we follow the MC after awakening & having memories of past lives make her worried she will lose who she was to them. Not to mention learning to get stronger to protect the ones close to her. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]