Sayto_Mora

this is a good chapter, the intro was good even though it's not perfect and needs to improve, its still good overall. also why did you stop updating your second book? i was waiting for the fight author. can't believe i can't see who will win between shadow or the demon guy. well don't stop this time.

For a 15 year old like you to write this, it seems pretty good.Aslo it has potential so keep going