Kiwi_Man
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The goat himself
This gonna be the best character development in history
No Continue
You're getting too close for comfort
Ptsd from the one who left to get the milk
Because he's a bum
First jumping hopefully there will be more
Please let the oc die Please let the oc die Please let the oc die Please let the oc die
Please no oc they ruin the story
Check the mom too
Bum?
I pray on his downfall
Tbh i only read four chapters before dropping it's not my cup of Tea i found it incredibly cringey (especially the banzai part) but the concept is very cool. The main character is my biggest complaint he's just bad i guess (feels really dry in my opinion) but that's all i have to say. I'm not saying it's unreadable I'm just saying there's room for improvement
Another example is a (car going 40km for every hour) and a (car going 80km for every 2 hours) they're both going at the same speed