AthensAwaitsMe

If you have any questions, please feel free to reply to this review. I just wanted to give myself a pat on the back for all the hard work I've put into this story. :D

I like the concept of the story, especially with the author's use of mythology, but the text was a bit hard to read, since it was sometimes a bit inconsistent. The flow of the story was okay, but at times it felt like there was a strange lump of information.

The storyline is very interesting and unique, but there are some grammatical errors here and there. Other than that, the writing style is very captivating, and really pulls you into the novel. The characters are great as well.

This story really reminds me of ORV, and the style of the writing is very unique and interesting. The characters are not my favorite, but everyone likes something different. I like how the story is funny, while also being serious when it needs to be. Sometimes, the writing got a bit repetitive, but overall, this novel was very good.

I like how this novel is very similar to ORV. I liked that story.

The story is off to a great start! Even though there are only three chapters so far, I'm already waiting for more. The characters each have these unique personalities that are both interesting and special (my personal favorite is Bell). I'm very excited to keep reading!

The writing is very, very, very detailed and easy to understand. It really pulls you into the wonderful world that the author has created. The characters have such realistic and interesting reactions that I could not stop reading! I liked the concept and the cover (of course), but the writing really brought out everything that I was looking for. Great job!

I think the overall novel has been getting better with each rewrite. I like the story a lot more now, and the writing has gotten smoother as the author gets more experienced. Great job!

The world building was wonderful, and I felt like I was really inside the story. The introduction into the story was very well done, and it was really smooth.

The writing is very good! I love how descriptive the author is. The story progresses at the perfect pace, and the characters are so interesting! I'm so attached to Lucy already.