BoneyWhiteGuy

I Honestly feel like u lean into him being a retard too much instead of just making him make smart decisions.

You can have your account and novel removed from the app so idk why your doing this

Why’d u have to describe something with when it’s one of the most important things that we need to know,I don’t give a shit if we will eventually know or whatever because that shits just annoying. I’m not reading anymore because of that but other than that this is one of the best stories I’ve seen.

This chapter is bullshit,he suddenly has a weak memory and your acting like he can even limit his senes to that degree at his current level. Don’t downgrade his quality just to make a plot,u did this with the last chapter too.

If you aren’t paying for views and shit then your novels all have a lot of saves and they all got less then fifty or even half that,if you just continued writing then you would be able to do this as a job if that rate of growth continued. That’s assuming you’re good at writing and making a good story/plot in general though.

Thanks for telling me cause I had literally no idea what they were called till now👍

On purpose most likely

Exactly

That doesn’t make this garbage.you obviously have no idea what garbage and something with potential look like.

You should put a character thing for the mc because it’ll likely help u get more readers. From what I’ve seen,this is far above average(chapter 3)