Jon_0094

maybe deed to the ship would fit better?

excuse me?

I have more then 2 f*****g brain cells 😆

I hope not being on this plane of existence is good enough lol🤣

instead of "shook their heads", "nodded their heads" make more sense. shook has the implied meaning of no and nodded implies yes

I have seen alot of people in the comments trying to tell you how the story should go but I think you should just do what you want to write because otherwise you will just get burnt out. But love the rewrite so far and thanks for the story so far

maybe it was not counting what he has done so far? I mean it didi say it was intilizing so maybe the 4000 was just to keep him alive from the system because other wise my man was doomed

me too this has been great so far!

Would it be better if he was handsome??? 😆