If you have any question that your would like answered and are currently caught up with the novel then ask here.

Not currently, but there will be later in the novel.

So this is where i would prefer for people to put their suggestions for Name of the Elf girl, the deadline is the 21st. and if you just have any questions about the story feel free to ask

If you have questions ask them on here, I'll respond to them as much as I can without spoiling the story

So the powers that they have slighty confuse me but maybe Im just dumb, but the pacing is a little fast and that makes some things possibly confusing so I would try to work on slowing the pacing quite a bit but decent chapter.

It is good that you can see some of the issues you have please try to fix the paceing issue since the character development can be showed in latter chapters

Im a little confused on some of the things you have but the concept seems to be kinda of solid so good job. ill keep reading it for a while if there in improvement so best of luck.

As the Authro of this book I’ll ask anyone if they have any questions or suggestions for me if so reply to this comment

Loved the book so far, and as a fellow author I can just recommend to not listening to the hate but to also still listening since some people will give real advice

I have only just finished the 6th chapter but I think that this book has potential, keep writing author many other authors will quit when they don't see progress in views but just keep writing

Other than the issue with the text saying 5 out of 100 exp and then when the status screen says 5 out of 10 exp I would say that this book so far is pretty good for a start, I hope you continue to write and not quit like many authors

Solid first chapter

this book seems interesting