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Harley_DB7hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 6 The Rise of the first Intelligent Race- Harley_DB3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 3 Chapter 3 - The Beginning of the Unavoidable Prophecy.
- Harley_DB3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 85 The start of a Revolution & Congressman
- Harley_DB4dแปะแล้ว
Should have been great and it does have great potential but author ruins MC with him apparently being 32 and having like 20 years extra mentally from the future but he acts like he is 10 for some reason and takes nothing seriously when there is risk of everyone dying because he doesn’t take it serious 🤦♂️ like come on author if you make a child MC don’t act like this is a 32 year olds personality just change it to him being 14 or something
- Harley_DB4dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Can you stop author? Hey is 32 years old not 10 so please chill out and have him act his age, like this is his personality after 20 years of hell? and he has his family back and the only emotion you have shown him having is holding back one tear when he first saw them and then he just because a child.
"Alright everyone, shut up and stand up," Cain said, interrupting the fight that was about to break out between the young lads. "Rick and Emma stand at the front; three of you always be near Amelia and defend her. Justin, act like an actual Assassin and blend in into the cave, waiting until I tell you to hop out like a rabbit and stab some ass. And I, yours truly, will wear the crown and kick some-- hey, guys, I'm not done with my speech! I still have like three badass one-liners! Tsk, fine, have it your way!" Cain begrudgingly followed everyone inside, entering a wide and tall tunnel lit up by strange gems embedded into the high ceiling. - Harley_DB4dแปะแล้ว
- Harley_DB6dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 14 Star Wars : Chapter 14 : Princess Rescue II
- Harley_DB8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 13 Star Wars : Chapter 13 : Princess Rescue I
- Harley_DB8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 11 Chapter 10: Bilbo Baggins
- Harley_DB8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 10 Chapter 9: Good morning
- Harley_DB8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 12 Star Wars : Chapter 12 : Inside the Death Star II
- Harley_DB10dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 11 Star Wars : Chapter 11 : Inside the Death Star I
- Harley_DB10dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 10 Star Wars : Chapter 10 : Alderaan's End
- Harley_DB11dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 50 DA : Chapter 50: Typhoon Falls! I
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- Harley_DB19dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 83 The Denalis & The unwritten rules
- Harley_DB20dแปะแล้ว
Good idea and started good but author seemed to give up and not care about the chapters and writing continues to decline chapter after chapter👎 Also no chapters are edited it seems and author leaves the outline of the chapter at the start so you know the end of the chapter but then the author skips back to the beginning and actually starts the story with the characters talking and doing stuff. Doing this ruins it cause you already know what’s happened but you there was not character interaction at first so you want to read it but it pisses you off cause you just read the whole outline of the chapter and have to remember which scene it’s from🤦♂️ Author Please re edit your chapters and fix this
- Harley_DB28dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 32 Chapter 32:The true monster of the leaf
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- Harley_DB1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 31 Chapter 31: The Weaver