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A good way to shut these people up would be to include these excuses in the narrative it self, specially if people can't come to these conclusions by themselves "Barely awake" "running om fumes" "taking a toll on hes body" "ragged breaths" idk just make it more obvious that hes not on hes 100%? That seems to be what some people missed im the narrative

Well said

I feel like the story is fine, I don't have complaints about it, people mostly want the story to go their way, specially since its a fanfic, its like when you're watching a streamer and he doesn't take the path YOU would have taken Im really enjoying the story, better then most of the slop you usually find in webnovel Having said that, a good excuse for him letting them drink shimmer is: hes high on adrenaline, not thinking straight, hes probably intoxicated by various chemicals and poisonous stuff and so on, these are all plausible answers Big fan of the story

The tension and frustration was palpable in the last chapters, it was so rewarding seeing lukas freeing himself and unleashing everything he had on silco and his men, and the final showdown with the shimer brutes was great Awesome story man, this is some quality work right here and the writing as ive said before feels very rewarding

Nice work, im loving the story, specially the personalities and interactions of the characters

Lovely lovely little chapter in all seriousness i gotta say, im hooked on this story so far, its pretty badass honestly, nice work dude

Oh man, that's really cool, cant wait to see what happens next, kill Canon is in for it now

Im curious, i haven't read invincible and i only watched a few episodes, is this following the the same time line as those? Or are events happening at different times then in cannon?

I do wonder how hes gonna get out of this one

Thanks for chapter