John_Wick_0272

bro give him a black panther as a pet or something like that.

nice fight scene not too overpowered just good enough to enhjoy

there is something called plot armour

well I will like to read more chapters before commenting on the story. best of luck bro 🤞🤞🤞

jean grey and natasha

characters need little development but what can I say afterall l have never written a novel or something like that. but man story is quite good 👍👍👍 so best of luck bro

if it's like an open relationship like thing I think the author should not let them have more contact. other than that part i believe fanfiction is quite good 💯.

well yes so far I am enjoying the story. Best of luck 🍀 for future.

i didn't like the stepfather scene but you are the author so i will wait and see.

nice 👍. something new and no cliche